Creative Writing: The Hero's Journey

There were once three friends Luke, Adam, and Eli. They were running for their lives from alien soldiers. They had only some food, water and a knife each. “Runnnnn they're gaining on us!” yelled Luke who was at the front. After they lost them they stopped to rest. They were in the forest of pyrex. They knew they had to get to hi valley for it was the only safe place in all the world. They were close to the place thought they just had to avoid many soldiers and bullets and then it would be a straight shot to the valley. Eli pointed to a map and said “It might be a few day stretch from here.” “But” interrupted Adam “There are soldiers everywhere that will shoot you on the spot,” luke said “We should go this way through the Spirit forest because, there is no way any soldier would go through it.” even though the voyage would take longer it was the safest way.

They found out why no one went to the spirit forest it was filled with ghosts.
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Adam said “We must go through the forest so everyone get your knife out.” Even though the knives will not do anything against the ghosts. “only plasma guns would work against the ghosts” Luke said “We have to find one first or take one” Eli said. Luckily there was three nearby soldiers holding plasma guns and plasma knives. They managed to sneak up on them and knocked them out with a rock. Then Adam said “This person has a key for something,” “But why?” Eli said “we should take the key with us just in case.” But little did they know that key might just save their life and almost end