Creative Writing: Ethan's Cabin

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Flames came to life and waltzed with the shadows on the ebony walls. The dim light was enough to watch ashes, once ablaze, fall into a grey mush. I lifted the blunt to my lips to take another breath of ‘fresh air’, it was almost as if the smoke raced through my lungs pulling as much of the dark matter out of me as it could- for the time being. Voices creeped through the smoke, under the threshold, to my ear which brought mixed emotions.I could hear my brother Ethan laugh at a joke my best friend Mason made. “Where is blake?” Ethan’s laugh faded into seriousness. Mason didn’t think as much of my absence, “He’s in his room being a pussy.” “Blake get out, were having a good time together, there’s no reason for you to lock yours…” It was hard …show more content…

Usually that would be horrifying but anything was better than having to relive seeing me try to drag my mom from her car without her stabbing me with a knife. Things came back to perspective. I was on a lake slowly drifting toward a cabin. The lake was covered with a thick smog that danced like clouds in the darkness. I swept through the windows into the bedroom where a shotgun lay on the bed. Smoke drifted out of the barrel as if it had just been fired. I didn't want to keep moving across the room because I knew what awaited me, but I had no control over where my subconscious spirit lead me. So I drifted to the other side of the bed where the body of an older man lay bullet wound in his skull with blood and brain splatter everywhere. I know that the gun being on the bed makes no sense because a living person would have had to set it there, but I was never there in the real world while his body was still there so this is just how my mind has manifested this memory. There were five marble colored pieces of paper perfectly folded and stacked on eachother near the bed side- top one labeled Blake and it was opened. The note suddenly become audible to …show more content…

I was in my bed gasping for air- my last blunt still red at the ashes. Everything rocked as I moved but I got up anyway. I needed to find Ethan. Stumbling up the stairs, I somehow made my way to the back yard where the boys were having a fire. It was dark out just life it was at the cabin. I could see that everyone was asking me what I was doing as I walked passed them towards the pond, but all I heard was a ringing. I was angry- livid. My life's a mess and everyone I love leaves. I started grabbing rocks and throwing them, i'm not sure where but I was screaming as I did. I tried to wander back to the house but ethan grabbed me. At this point things were somewhat audible so I could vaguely hear him asking me what was wrong and what I took. He was soon interrupted by the neighbor screaming. I whipped around to find the barrel of a gun pressed to my forehead and an old white man in a fuzzy robe with the trigger in hand. “You broke my window son,” He somehow croaked without dropping the lit cigarette from the other corner of his

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