Creative Writing: Empire Island

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I boarded this ship from Spain with hopes of finding treasure in a faraway land. My thirty men and I set sail in the first month of the year, however, our journey was setback by severe thunderstorms at sea in early May. The worst storm came on a dark night when I was sailing the ship while my men slept in their cabins. The waves came roaring overhead and pounded aboard. The ship broke in half like a twig. The back end of the boat was then crushed by ten-foot waves; my men were gone, separated from me and never to be seen again. After being tossed overboard, I swam my way to a shore nearby where I then slept on the beach until the morning. When I awoke, I found that I had swam to a small island. There were dead trees along the shore with branches …show more content…

Therefore, I used the elements of isolation, a hidden and decaying setting with dark colors and a storm, and I used mystery to lead to the plot twist. The isolation is with relation to the fisherman since he wants to live alone on the island (he only lets spirits accompany him not live people). Next, I used setting to make the beach empty and dark like the rocks. The shed was hidden in a sense that it was not seen until later in the poem and the description of the rough gravel sand makes the appearance of a decaying beach. There were also storm clouds that brought darkness and horror to the island, which again played into the idea of decay because dark colors typically symbolize death. When the ghost of the young woman is first introduced, the reader is left with questions because it is a mystery of who she is, where she came from, and how she got in this shed that appeared at the beach. Both the girl and the shed play into the mystery of the story but it is portrayed in a horrific manor, which makes the story creepy and scary. I used a plot twist- the girl having been a young woman who was aboard the ship- to play into the emotions of the reader because gothic and romantic literature tend to bring about emotions of fear within the reader. Throughout the story vivid details and imagery are used to further these gothic elements. The overall theme of this short story was dark isolation- dark relating to how the beach was physically dark and metaphorically since the fisherman sought to kill anyone who came near his beach. The isolation refers not only to the fact that the fisherman wanted to live without any other live human beings there, but also to how the shed was standing alone and how the sailor was left alone on the deserted

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