Creative Writing: Bloody Marry

The most frightening sixteenth birthday. Halloween finally arrived and it was Robbin's sixteenth birthday. Her parents eventually decided that she was mature to bring her friends Charlie and Hallie for a sleepover; however, both of these girls bullied her constantly and were not frightened of anything. “Ding Dong” the doorbell rang loudly. Robbin froze as the bell constantly kept echoing in her head while her heart rapidly pumped . Hallie and Charlie walked in, pulling off the most innocent face and pretending like they were angels in front of Robbin's parents. At first, it shocked her because she thought the day might turn out better that she thought! Yet, once Robbin's parents left the house the two girls giggled to each other speaking

For a moment, Robbin stared at the mirror while taking a long breath to calm down since she desperately wished this day would be over. At that same moment, Charlie and Hallie thought of distracting the girls and playing a game, which could be fun. They suggested, "Robbin would you like to play a game called Bloody Marry?" Robbin paused and asked, "Is that the game where we would look into the mirror say that name three times and apparently a ghost would appear?" She laughed and said this is fake only children believe such a game is true. Charlie and Hallie held Robbins hands and said calmly "If it's fake and you're not scared then why should we not try it?" Eventually, they decided to begin playing. Robbin turned off the lights also, closed the bathroom door. The toilet was massive it contained three showers and a jacuzzi so, the girls spread out. Each of them held a candle that smells like lavender. The three girls held hands and began saying "Bloody Marry, Bloody Marry, Bloody Marry, come out wherever you

Her hands were shaking moreover, she was crying trying to cover her face. "What happened?" Robbin screamed. Hallie responded mumbling in horror, " Look Charlie’s face features are changing into a ghost!" Unexpectedly, water started filling up in the tub so, Robbin tried to turn the tap off quickly. However, the ghost grabbed hold of her by the neck and drowned her into the ice cold water. Robbin was fighting to breath; yet, she did not have the power or energy to defeat the ghost. Hallie did not know to react in this situation, she tried to help Robbin; however, she felt burning fire crawl on her legs from the candle. There was no way to escape now. At this stage, Charlies features started to re-appear and she had a headache. She looked around confused about what had happened earlier while tears started flowing from her eyes. She looked at the ashes of her best friend on the floor trying to gather them. Then, she noticed the bathtub and found Robbins dead in a pool of bright red blood. Charlie started howling loudly in guilt as she never got a chance to apologize to