Creative Writing: A Town Called Hopeville

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A Town Called Hopeville I awoke early to a cold and rainy day. I could sleep no more for this was the day I am removed from childhood and thrust into adulthood. This is the day that I shall learn what fate I must endure for the rest of my life. On this day, all thirteen year old girls and boys are taken to the arena to learn what the elders of our town, Hopeville, have decided shall be our place in society for the rest of our lives. What they feel is best for society. Since I was old enough to walk and talk, I learned about our little town, the Elders, the Watchers, and the rules of our society. Hopeville, is a little town of approximately five hundred men, women, girls, and boys. Hopeville was established by our forefathers who searched …show more content…

I was too anxious to eat, which Mom had already known. Mom coaxed me to eat a little and drink the daily orange flavored beverage that we started off with every day. We also had to take the morning pill. I asked my Mom why we had to have the pill and the drink. I was only told, "It is the rules." Then, we left for the arena. The arena was the gathering building where all meetings were held. The Elders sat on a raised area of the stage. There were rows and sections of chairs built around the stage. Our families proceeded us to the seats, and the thirteen year olds were sat in a room just outside of the stage. I saw my life-long friends nervously sitting in the room. I chose my best friends, Cindy and Chase, and sat between them. Cindy was fidgeting in her seat. "I wondered what job I will be assigned to," she said, "I hope it is the Nursery. I love taking care of the babies." Chase said, "I don't know what I want to do. I guess that is why the Elders choose for us." I looked at Chase with amazement, "What if you don't like the job you have been assigned to. What if you want to do something different." Chase quickly said, "You can always appeal their …show more content…

Time and time again we have found you wondering in the valley where you are not suppose to be. We do not think that you would be happy with any assignments that we have. Therefore, you will be led out of our town never to return." My parents were in complete disbelief. They could not imagine that I was being banished. "Why, our you doing this," my mother asked. The Elder looked at her with a harsh glare. "You know that you cannot question our decision. You must and you will obey." My mother bowed her head in silence. My father held her tight. But, I, said "Why do we have to obey what you say." The Elder shot back, "Because this is the way it has been done for centuries." I retorted, "Then it is time that the laws should be changed. That the Elders and Watchers be done away with, and that our Society start choosing for themselves what they want to be and what they want to do." After quite a struggle, our way of life was changed. Was it better or worse. Only time will tell. As for me, I have decided that I want to take care of the valley's wildlife, trees, and mountains. They are the only things that remain unchanged in our little town of

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