Creative Writing: A Fictional Narrative

I flop down on my bed and answer the phone
"Hello beautiful,"
"Alex," when Autumn says my name she sounds so scared, my heart starts to pound and images of every possible thing that could be wrong fly through my head
"Autumn, What's wrong?" I ask, panicked
"He's drunk again. He is smashing all the pictures of me or mom. He is getting closer to my room. I'm scared Alex, talk to me." She keeps her voice low so her dad can't hear her talking to me
"About what baby?" I ask softly, trying to keep her calm. If she freaks out and he tries to hurt her, she could freeze up and get really hurt.
"Anything." She whispers
"Did you see the sun set?" I ask
"Yes, it was amazing." I can practically see her smiling as she talked about science.
"What do you want to do for our date tomorrow, when I'm officially ungrounded." I smile, barely able to contain my excitement, I can't wait to see her tomorrow.
"I don't care, as long as I'm with you." She says laughing quietly.
"That was cheesy as hell." I laugh
"I know!" Autumn giggles but quickly stops "Alex he's coming!" She whisper yells
"Okay Autumn, stay calm, if I need to I will come get you." I say, slight panic in my voice
"Okay." She answers. I hear a knock at my door so I hide my phone. My mom comes into my room

Her dad will kill her, mom! He hits her and eventually he will kill her!" My voice cracks. I open the door and start running toward Autumn's house. I hear my my calling my name behind me but I keep running, Autumn is the most important thing right now. I get to her house and run to her window. I peek inside her window and find Autumn standing near the corner and her dad in front of her, yelling. He raises his hand and hits her right below the eye. He hits her again and her nose starts to bleed. I want to run to her, see if she is okay, and then punch her dad so hard that he is knocked out for days. Her dad leaves the room and I knock on the window and and she rushes over and opens