Comparison Of Berry Picking And Water

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Irving Layton’s “Berry Picking” and Robert Lowell’s “Water” both explore the natural world’s connection to human lives and relationships. Both authors use literary devices such as imagery, diction, rhyme, and metaphor to convey the messages of their poems. Collectively, the poems portray the natural world as being powerful, as well as being controlling of human lives and relationships.

The poem “Berry Picking” offers a message that the natural world has the power to corrupt human relationships. Layton first presents this message by using metaphor. A metaphor is “A figure of speech in which a comparison is made or identity is asserted between two unrelated things” (p.1495). In his poem, Layton uses metaphor to associate the berries, a representative …show more content…

The nature of the wife’s interaction with the berries solidifies this metaphor. She puts them “in her mouth” (13), and “Bends or straightens” (5) repeatedly to each bush, while they “taste good to her” (15). These actions aid in demonstrating the flirtation and sexual imagery that exists between the wife and the berries. Moreover, the jealousy the speaker has towards the berries, as well as the wife’s love for the berries over him, further strengthens this metaphor of another man with the speaker’s wife. Another way Layton shows the negative effects of the natural world on the relationship is by using diction, the “word choice” (p.1488) in the poem, to link and distance specific individuals or objects in the poem. The speaker describes the berries as lying “easily” (17), which connects them to the wife’s “easy soul” (21). Similarly, he describes the wife as having “quiet hands” (7), which connects her with the silent berries and the “quiet summer” (7). Additionally, the natural berries are “unoffending” (18), which presents a contrast between them and the husband, who is “vex[ing]” (9), “perplex[ing]” (9) and “barbarous” (16). Finally, Layton utilizes the rhyme scheme of the poem to mirror

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