Commentary on Lorna Sage, Bad Blood (2000)

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Commentary on Lorna Sage, Bad Blood (2000)

This passage revolves around a young girl's life, how it has changed

and what it has become. It is ironically, how a friendship has evolved

into something that the two girls who are exposed in this passage have

never thought it would become. Sage introduces us to what we can

conclude to be herself in the first paragraph of this passage, whilst

introducing us to her dear friend (or shall we say greatest enemy?) in

the second paragraph.

The relationship between Gail and the narrator is one of typical young

girl's relationships with another girl. Sage develops the relationship

between these two young girls from two very contradicting ways; Hate

to Love. As the narrator mentions;

"…now she was my sworn enemy."

This quote makes it quite obvious how the narrator felt about Gail.

When you use the word sworn enemy, it emphasizes the amount of hatred

you have towards that person, which makes it crystal clear to us how

the relationship between Gail and the narrator was. Yet, ironically,

this all changes, within no more than 2 words from that quote, when

the narrator opens up the relationship between her and Gail when she

says;

"(she even had a funny name, like me)"

In this quote, the narrator starts to open up to Gail, accepting her,

as she starts to compare her to herself. That is where the

relationship actually began. Although they started off bullying each

other and beating each other up, as shown when Sage says;

"Once she'd thoroughly trounced me in public…"

this quote, also, is pretty much right to the point, very straight

forward, the narrator speaks openly and sort of what proud of being

trounced, of being whitewashed by Gail, because it let to som...

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...e way we can understand this passage, for example,

would you enjoy a passage that was all about two girls (or even two

guys, let us not be sexist!) that was all about bullying and all about

racism and socialism and so on? This passage, with the emphasis of the

narrators' feelings into it, shows us exactly how real friendships

turn out to be, and it is true, this passage does reflect on the real

way strong relationships are actually made! (I would know, it's

happened to me!) but for me, this passage was really a play back to my

old life. I've gone through exactly what Sage, or the narrator has

gone through, and turned out with a friendship stronger than ever!

When you're young, without a doubt you ought to feel jealousy towards

a certain person in your grade/year, for some reason or another, which

will, believe it or not, lead to a really strong friendship.

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