College Admissions Essay: My Motivation For Achieving Success

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When I envision success for myself it is predicated on what I give freely to others. My motivation for success is simple. I desire for those around me to be healthy, happy, and whole. For much of my life, I believed that I would work in healthcare. At thirteen years old, during the summer I would visit the Assisted Living home near my home every Sunday after church. I would pray, sing hymns, and just sit and talk with them. I often wondered how life would be different for the forty-five year old man that had survivor wars but lost his leg because of poor diabetic care. Not to mention, the fifty-year-old woman that was clinically obese and required help with basic daily task. I felt great joy and fulfillment helping those that were ailing. However, even as a teenager I felt compiled to do more. …show more content…

I was terrified at the idea that I may never be able to play basketball again. I was only a kid and my only dream was to play sports in college and become a professional athlete. Given that I was young and scared my orthopedic surgeon Dr. Brown sat with me in his office for over a hour telling me stories of athletes he ‘fixed” that continued playing sports. More importantly, these young athletes performed better after their surgeries. Dr. Brown ensured me that he would do the very best to fix my knee and the rehabilitation staff would help me become stronger, faster, and better than before. In all honesty, the medical staff did just that for me. As well as, educated me on diet, nutrition, and injury

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