Cherokee Removal Thesis

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The thesis statement "In preparing for the Cherokee Removal, state, and federal officials were motivated solely by desire to seize the Natives' land." First off, who is preparing for the removal? Was it the white settlers or was it entailing the natives themselves? The thesis statement is not complex enough and fails to mention the Trail of Tears or the preparations that were taken to remove the Cherokee's. In this way, the full historical picture is avoided making the thesis difficult to under why and how the natives were affected. A reworked thesis statement: Despite the Georgian's fear of brutality against the Cherokee Tribes, the Treaty of New Echota was even more significant than the state, and federal official's seizure of the Native

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