Attention Getter For The Death Penalty Essay

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Pre-writing- Outline Introduction:
Attention Getter: Does somebody really deserve to be sentence with the Death Penalty? Elaboration- information about the issue: This process was been practiced as a sentence to the criminals, back in the years. However, now in the day government still use it as a punishment to some delinquents. People are wondering if US should allow the Death Penalty. Thesis Statement: Supporters to the Death Penalty are falling because of the lack of evidence to prove they are doing the right, in contrast the opponents are finding more and more material to abolish the Death Penalty.

Body Paragraph 1 (opponent viewpoint)
Topic Sentence: The death penalty is a way to make justice for all the victims who …show more content…

(2010, November 19). Death penalty debates. CQ Researcher, 20, 965-988. Pre-writing- Outline Introduction:
Attention Getter: Does somebody really deserve to be sentence with the Death Penalty? Elaboration- information about the issue: This process was been practiced as a sentence to the criminals, back in the years. However, now in the day government still use it as a punishment to some delinquents. People are wondering if US should allow the Death Penalty. Thesis Statement: Supporters to the Death Penalty are falling because of the lack of evidence to prove they are doing the right, in contrast the opponents are finding more and more material to abolish the Death Penalty.

Body Paragraph 1 (opponent viewpoint)
Topic Sentence: The death penalty is a way to make justice for all the victims who can’t do it anymore. Introduce quote 1: K. Jost presents in his article Death Penalty Debates a crime where I father murdered his daughters and wife, in which the father was sentenced to death. The people against him selected the death as the best punishment to his crime. Quote: “It was just so heinous and just so over the top and depraved,” Herbert Gram told The New York Times. “Here is a case where somebody doesn 't deserve to remain on the face of the Earth” …show more content…

Closing sentence: The US should have think in a better way if it really need to execute those criminals, or if it can use that money to improve its citizens’ lives and take care of them.

Body paragraph 2nd reason (your stance)
Topic Sentence: The Death Penalty does not guarantees the public safety. Introduce quote 1: When a state execute a criminal, the possibly of get murder in the streets do not dismiss, states are killing people for nothing. The death of a criminal do not guarantees that safety of the society, so what can the US do for their country? Quote: Cornell law professor Blume illustrates, “We spend a lot of money to execute a very small number of people. We could take that money, spend it elsewhere and make society a safer place” (972). Explain quote: This recognizes that the money spend in the murder of criminals are not bringing benefits for the society, however, the country has the choice to change that. Transition Sentence for quote 2:There are a lot of different things that can help to increase the safety and benefit the whole country instead of just waste the money to kill

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