Argumentative Essay On Internet And Children

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The relationship between children and their interaction with the internet has been on the frontier for parental debate over the past few years. Ever since the internet was accessible to the masses, parents have argued over the perfect balance of exposure. However, In the article “Yes, the internet can make your kids smarter, happier, and kinder,” Jodi Gold argues that the internet can be beneficial to adolescent minds, regardless of how much time they spend in front of a screen. Gold goes against the common stigma of modern day parents, that the internet should stay out of the hands of children, and claims that the world wide web can do more good than bad. Gold provides several notes of discussion that present a handful of ways the internet can …show more content…

Gold is no stranger to this topic, and has written a whole book on the idea of blending digital technology with parenting. Throughout the article, “Yes, the internet can make your kids smarter, happier, and kinder,” it feels as if Gold either has more to say or could do more to provide the reader with a supported argument. Perhaps some of these ideas where runoff topics from her book. If Gold took more time to capitalize on the elements she did well, like the structure of the article, she could have constructed a more enticing argument that could stand on its own. Gold could have improved her writing by using Graff and Birkenstein advice found in They Say, I Say, and she could have learned to acknowledge the naysayer more often. Overall, Gold had the potential to create an outstanding argument that could disprove the naysayers but failed to bring in outside opinions. Especially when considering her background and her understanding of the topic Gold had the potential to make “Yes, the internet can make your kids smarter, happier, and kinder” an article with a lasting

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