Analysis Of Walter Whitman's Ashes Of Soldiers

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Throughout Ashes of Soldiers by Walter Whitman, Whitman uses a multitude of different words that help create a feeling of regret for the dead soldiers of the Civil War. Walter Whitman’s syntax and diction throughout Ashes of Soldiers accentuates the feeling of sympathy and loss, versus Whitman’s typical yearning for sexual pleasure, captures the feelings of a country overturned by war. Walter Whitman served as a nurse during the Civil War and the experience of seeing so many men with rotting, sweltering flesh created a mentality for the soldiers that was separate from his views of other men. Whitman’s typical feeling of lust towards men became replaced by an eerie feeling of anguish for those killing the soldiers and a nonsexual tenderness …show more content…

After working with the men that fought in the Civil War, Whitman clearly believed that they were underappreciated and deserved better than what they received. Whitman’s use of words that depict a sense of appreciation and gratitude for the men, “Shroud them, embalm them, cover them all over with tender pride.”, this puts into perspective the feeling that Whitman has for those who gave their lives in order to fight for the causes that they believe in (600). Although Whitman does recognize that the soldiers are ascetically pleasing by calling them his “My handsome tan-face horsemen!”, his defiance of using anything other than a cliché average description of them alludes to the fact that Whitman does not see these men as anything other than as men that fought for the United States in a way that he very much respected …show more content…

Whitman uses the absence of the soldiers as a way to emphasize how those who fought for the country are forgotten and not remembered as the heroes that they are. The poem talks of gathering all of the dead soldiers around him, all of the forgotten and selfless who have received no glory or fame from their sacrifice. Whitman states that the men are “Unseen by the rest and voiceless,” which very accurately depicts the situation that the soldiers were in (599). These men had given their lives for the country and had received no recognition for what they had done, causing turmoil to Whitman because he believed that they deserved more than that, claiming that he wrote this poem in order to tribute it “In the name of all dead soldiers,” (599). The experiences that Whitman went through, watching many different soldiers die, seeing his brother unable to help himself, all influenced the way that Whitman looked at the war and the soldiers of the war. When Whitman describes anything about the soldiers, he consistently mentions the absence of them talking about them as “Phantoms of countless lost,” instead of as a soldier or ghost they are memorialized within Whitman’s poem as the absence of a person (599). Although Whitman intended to give the soldiers of the Civil War a voice, he also felt the need to pay homage in a

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