Analysis Of Shiloh By Bobbie Ann Mason

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“Shiloh” by Bobbie Ann Mason: The clues to a broken marriage
Within the story “Shiloh” [Bobbie Ann Mason] there were many components that presented itself to prove that the Moffitt’s marriage was failing. Each character showed themselves in ways that seemed to give Leroy’s wife a discomfort at being in her own home such as Leroy persistently offering to give her a log house, yet failed to be on her side for many things such as dealing with her mother. Furthermore, the couple fails to acknowledge the issues within their marriage, for instances the child that they had lost. The issue with their marriage can seem to come from both sides since the wife of Leroy could have mentioned how she felt directly towards him about her struggle within …show more content…

Even though his wife “Norma Jean” seems to try to convince him to get one as stated within the text “. . . “things you could do,” she announces. “You could get a job as a guard at the Union Carbide” . . . [Leroy interrupts mid-sentence] “I can’t do something where I’d have to stand all day” (Mason 620) he seems to deny what she offers and even after she tries again he states that he would do something and leaves the subject alone. Another moment is when Norma Jean gets caught smoking by her mom “Mabel” and as a punishment, Mabel mentions this terrible event that happens to a child in which she states that the child must have been neglected. After that scene occurred Norma Jean seems distressed and when she looks for her husbands support he does not side with her. In the text it is clearly stated in the conversation “[Norma Jean states] the very idea, her [Mabel] bring up a subject like that! Saying it was neglect. [Leroy's’ response] she didn’t mean that.” (Mason 622) that only goes on further showing how he fails to comfort her and chooses to end the conversation in those terms leaving not siding with her. It is clear the wife felt very disturbed by the fact her own mom is going off at her because she got caught smoking but to have her husband not side with her is like a betrayal. That shows how …show more content…

If there was more discussed the child and them being able to have a conversation about it then it would also allow them to be open about other things as well. When Mabel mentioned the death of a child Norma Jean was clearly distressed yet even after that and Leroy spoke with her it was as if he wanted to stop the conversation from occurring. Even when he goes on to talk about his dead son he seems distant from even mentioning it and describing the movie. That show how his distance from that is also carrying distance in the relationship. Their deceased child is symbolism to how their marriage was and how they currently are. They may have loved one another at one point but it seemed forced for the sake of their child but after that, they choose to grief within their own ways that seemed to be closed up. Even when they are about to go to Shiloh the situation seems clear when Norma Jean does not consider the marriage as something worth deeming as good but burdening as mentioned when Mabel mentions how it could be like taking a honeymoon yet Norma Responses with ”who’s going on a honeymoon, for Christ’s sake?” (Mason 623) that shows she is clearly not happy with doing what both her husband and mom want her

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