Analysis Of Prefontaine

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“To give anything less than your best is to sacrifice the gift.” - Prefontaine I live by this quote on my personal life because it's inspiring. The overall meaning is if you have a gift or chance don't sacrifice it and act on it. Don’t ruin your chance and just do it. I try to live by that to always try my best on whatever I do to get the best grades and acquire the most knowledge. Over Junior has been my best year yet. I got out of my comfort zone by doing different thing and tried to be more out there. I believe I did, I joined Various clubs involving me into the overall community of Godinez. Clubs such as Red Cross, CSF, Key club and very recently ASB. Set back I believe would be more in sports because although I did perform I wasn’t …show more content…

It made me a better person because as captain I had to accommodate everyone's request to try to come up with the best workouts. When the coaching staff was not there I had to get everyone together and organize then into what we were going to do. For example, since our Track coach had worked during modified days I had to take charge of both the guys and girls team and organize them until the coach came in. However, an area I believe I need a lot more improvement is a responsibility to education because in a way I gave up the second semester. I felt like i was way to overwhelmed with AP testing that after I procrastinate on my homework. It got to a point where I have a lot of missing and late work. As you can see I need a lot more improvement and am starting to again, I turning in my later work. An ESLR that I believe I have mastered is the characteristic of Critical and Creative Thinker appreciate originality and aesthetics in all the project that I have done. For instance, I once spent all night redoing a Scholar In Me Project because I thought the previous one was not as nice as it could be and I created a pretty impressive project. I created an apple tree with the apples being the research that i had done and a cropped picture of my face in Isaac Newton face, in the end I was pretty satisfied with my work. On the contrary, a …show more content…

This simile state how important it is research is to college it's the only thing keeping it together. It is true, research and good research skills as greatly needed as a backbone is to your body. Meaning that yes, if i am not pretty much a pro in researching I will suffer slot during college. Another rhetorical device I used greatly during this essay was encoders such as in paragraph 3 and 4. They were mostly anecdotes of the areas I could improve on from my junior year. There purpose was to make this reflective essay by actually stating stories of where the information was relatable. For paragraph 5 in the second sentence I had used both ploysidenten and Irony because I stated that i believed that I was really mature yet, go on just repeating the conjunction “and” over and over again. Which is usually a characteristic of someone that is mature. The rhetorical devices were to present that fact that yes, I feel that I have matured, but I still need room for improvement. Like i have stated before, yes I was on top of my work, but as soon as second semester rolled on by I just lost focus and began to stalk

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