Thanksgiving Poem Thanks By Merwin

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Common curtesy has us saying “Thanks” to the point that we may have lost the intentions associated with the response. W.S. Merwin sums up this anomaly in his poem “Thanks”, saying “with nobody listening we are saying thank you” (Merwin 29). We say thanks for so many meaningless things that it no longer carry’s the true intent of the speaker. Instead it is a response to acknowledge the receiver rather than giving true thanks. This repetition allows for questions regarding what are we truly thankful for, and how we make this known to the receiver. Carl Dennis, in his poem, “Thanksgiving Letter From Harry”, struggles with this question. Not seeing himself thankful for all the negative atrocities around him, he tries to find something he …show more content…

Merwin’s reflection in the poem allows the reader to find the simple examples becoming mundane and less than hearty. “Listen/with the night falling we are saying thank you” (Merwin 1-2) which portrays the relation at the beginning of the poem with more meaning then near the end, “with the animals dying around us/our lost feelings we are saying thank you” (Merwin 22-23). Merwin is giving way to the pretense of extending thanks to things. Just because we utter thanks in truth we may not be thankful for the occurrence for which we have acknowledged. By now the speaker is just saying the words without the intended feeling of gratitude being …show more content…

The speaker is reaching for something with meaning that he can stand up to while providing a few unusual comparisons, “And I’m thankful my TV set is still broken” (Dennis 7). He sees no point in wasting his time saying he is thankful for the norms around him.
Instead the speaker continues to elaborate moving beyond being thankful and finding a new direction to continue his letter of thanks without overdoing the sentiment. He turns to his teaching and stories where being thankful may have a greater significance than the mundane things interpreted by Merwin. “This month I’d like to believe I’ve widened/My students’ choice of vocation, through the odds” (Dennis 1415), changing the directions from thankfulness to his dedication to teaching.
While comparing these two poems, it became apparent that while both intended to be centered upon giving thanks, they shared some disconnect with the true meaning of the word. While Merwin’s reader may find themselves following a pattern of disconnect on why even giving unheeded thanks was necessary, Dennis found a way to create a story within to follow a path beyond a mere thanks. Each in their own way acknowledge that without feeling saying “thanks” is yet one more way we play to the

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