Essay On The Necessure Of A College Education By Marty Nemko

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People are arguing for the necessity of a college education. America seems have the best education system in the world. People all around the world comes to this country. However, not all people thinks so. American career coach, author, columnist, Marty Nemko is very disappointed with the college education system in the USA. He wrote a long argument to prove and convince people how horrible the system is, which is different from our common sense. In his essay, lots of facts are listed by a very passionate voice and also logical, which states his idea clearly.
The article is mainly talking about the truth of the weakness of the US education system. For the author Marty Nemko himself, he is a kind of well known writer in his town in New York. …show more content…

Also he evolved the idea of people could not earn more by taking education in college by previous facts. Then, he wrote about an example of a person who earned bachelor 's degree who could not find a job. The person borrow money to earn a master 's degree. But the best job was a three-month long $3,000 job. He became a track driver now. Here he used logos, namely data, first, and he used a example as pathos which could make his argument more powerful. Combined with shocking data, he made his argument very strong.
Continue with this, he said that introductions on brochure are totally not equal to the real. In his seventh paragraph, the term "college are business" were stated and it shows students are just cost item and professors could only live here with research money they earned for the school. Here he used a strong ethos and let audiences strongly loosing the confidence of colleges.
In the following paragraphs, he proved that lots of students are dissatisfied to school which means failing the exam and could not learn something necessary by evolvements of ideas and UCLA 's data. Finally he stated how could we, especially parents, do when governments are not punishing but rewarding

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