Analyzing Prison System Issues in English 102

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As a second semester freshman, I found English 102 to be one of my favorite classes. My professor Sally Benson, structured our class’s curriculum around issues in the prison system. More specifically juveniles in adult prisons, college classes for incarcerated individuals, and prison privatization. I found this quite interesting because every assignment we did directly correlated to these three issues. In the beginning of the semester, we, as a class, analyzed all three of these issues, to get a become well acquainted with each topic. This helped tremendously when it came to writing the first paper, the rhetorical analysis. Student were asked to choose a text from a list of resources and analyse how that text works- what he/she see a text saying, …show more content…

The information I used to present in each argument highlighted key facts on the issue and familiarized both audiences on why I believe juveniles in adult jails is unjust. I effectively did this by using this quote “The reality is, in America, some criminals make it out alive with a decent head on their shoulders, many make it out mentally, emotionally, and/ or physically damaged, others make it out to go back in and the rest don’t make it out at all”. This quote not only outright explains the problem it supports my stance. Shaping the argument for both the open letter and presentation was the easiest part of both assignments because of the issue I chose. To prove how unjust this issue was, I used the stories of Taurus Buchanan and Kalief Browder as examples of how the prison system causes more self harm than self healing for these troubled juveniles. After presenting that quote and two anecdotes to both audiences, I made a call for action to get both parties involved. I did this by presenting the solution: Instead of immediately sending these offenders straight to an adult facility, he/she should be sentenced a juvenile sentence until they are eighteen, and when this occurs he/she will be transferred to an adult facility to serve the rest of their time. This caused both audiences to think about the issue on a broader scale and possibly come up with a solution of their own. Finally, to win over and persuade both audiences that sending juveniles to adult prisons is unlawful is the tone I used both in my open letter and my presentation. By having a confident, informative, passionate, and stern tone, I informed both parties that this is a serious problem that is often over-looked by our society and needs to be

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