Political Thought In The Declaration Of Independence

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The Declaration of Independence is a document, drafted for the purpose of the American colonies declaring independence from British rule. The document states the rights, liberties, and grievances of the American citizens. The Declaration of Independence is not an original contribution to American Political thought, because it derives from previous political thought philosophies. It includes significant amounts of material from Locke and Montesquieu, it was based on grievances already stated in previously drafted documents, and was collectively revised. The Political philosophies stated in the Declaration are stemmed from the works’ of John Locke and Montesquieu. Thomas Jefferson used the philosophies when constructing the document, which expressed …show more content…

The American Colonies have constantly been persistent in listing their grievances to Parliament, in the hope of breaking British ties. It is clear that Thomas Jefferson used previously drafted document to construct the grievances mentioned in the declaration, since they were the general consensus of what the colonies were going through at the time. The first example of how Jefferson refers to early drafted documents, is in regards to the famous line “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their creator with certain unalienable rights, that among theses, are life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness”. The rights of the citizens are expressly laid out in the Declaration of independence. In the Virginia Bill of Rights of 1776, it mentions “all men are equally free and independent, and have certain inherent rights, of which, when they enter into a state of society, they cannot by any compact, deprive or divest their posterity; namely, the enjoyment of life, liberty, with the means of acquiring and possessing property, and pursuing and obtaining happiness and safety.” There is a clear similarity between the two statements. The Virginia bill of rights was drafted before the declaration, which can conclude with strong evidence that Jefferson took some of the same ideas from the document when writing the …show more content…

Thomas Jefferson was indeed the author, but John Adams and Benjamin Franklin were a part of the revising process. The first example on how it is not original is Thomas Jefferson’s original draft of the Declaration of independence, which shows the significant amount of revising the document went through before becoming the final draft. The two documents are very different in the sense that Adams and Franklin have also included their viewpoints to it. In the original document Jefferson mentions a section on slavery, where he states “He has waged cruel war against human nature itself, violating it 's most sacred rights of life and liberty in the persons of a distant people who never offended him, captivating and carrying them into slavery in another hemisphere, or to incur miserable death in their transportation thither.” In the Final draft of the declaration this section on slavery was removed. Thomas Jefferson’s original draft was made clearer and easier to follow. The statement “We hold these truths to be self- evident, that all men are created equal…” was revised from the original draft, which stated “We hold these truths to be self-evident; that all men are created equal and independent; that from that equal creation they derive rights inherent and inalienable…” The words equal independent was changed to equal, since the rights listed are self-evident. The rights are

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