Creative Writing: My Mommy

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My mom is Beautiful; the words to describe her appearance would be insufficient. She is beautiful in all her aspects. Her smile shines like the sun at sunrise. My mommy has black hair with shimmering sprays of white, long and smooth curls like noodle spaghetti. Her eyes are black and round, filled with love. When my mommy laughs you can see a beautiful love in the side of her cheek. My mommy is average height; she has large eyelashes and figured eyebrows. Her lips are thick with a sparkle of pink; nose is medium and much defined. Her ears are rounded and neither too large nor too small, "normal". In general her face is smooth with a bit of wrinkles on her forehead but beautiful still. She is of robust constitution, but with nice curves. My mommy doesn't like to go out on the street without dressing up. She loves to dress very presentable and in fashion. For instance, every time she goes to the gas station even do she would come back home quickly, she will dress up and where her heels. For me, my mommy is the gorgeous women of all. You offer a lot of physical description here. Consider whether you need all of it. You might be more successful focusing on a few of the most prominent features, to create a distinct image of her.
The action that she portrays is sweet and kind. When she walks, she moves as a warrior prepared for the battle. The nature of my mommy is pleasant and affectionate, but when she is angry is a strong character. In some occasions she gets mad but not all the time. Although I have noticed that her patient has started to crumble. My mother is a very positive person that always makes me see the good side of everything. She is very kind and is always thinking of me, she tries to teach me and give me everything she ...

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... in tears. I explained to her what had happen; my mom knew how hard I had worked for that class. She used one of her favorite phrases, “breath and relax tomorrow the sun will shine”. She’s my biggest fan and I’m her favorite cheerleader.
I don't know what else to say about my mommy, although I would like to, I cannot get any defect, although from time to time she gets angry with me, but because I have behaved badly, although she scream, however I look at her, to me she is perfect, she is my everything, my protector, my healer, my queen. I am a reflection of what she wanted to be some day. I’ve seen her cry and suffer, but I have never seen her give up. Even do she didn’t know how to speak English, she learned the language and became an ESL teacher assistant. She has taught me that after every storm a rainbow will always come if you fight towards the finish line.

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