Commentary on Through the Tunnel

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In the short story “Through the Tunnel” by Doris Lessing a young boy named Jerry takes on the risky challenge of swimming through a narrow and long underwater tunnel on his holiday at the beach. It is an interesting story with a variety of remarkable characters.

In the story, Jerry is on holiday at the beach with his mother, when he sees a group of older men diving through an underwater tunnel. This fascinates him so he starts practicing to hold his breath and dive until he can be like them. When he finally tries, he finds out how difficult it is and almost drowns. The rising action starts as he swims into the tunnel for the first time. The climax is when he almost drowns. “He must go on into the blackness ahead, or he would drown. His head was swelling, his lungs crackling.”

There are few important characters in this story. Jerry is introduced using direct characterization and so is his mother. “He was an only child, eleven years old. She was a widow. She was determined to be neither possessive nor lacking in devotion.” But they’re actual personalities are shown indirectly. Th...

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