Critical Analysis Of Poor Teeth

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The article Poor Teeth was written by Sarah Smarsh with the goal in mind being to shed light on the issue between upper and lower class society in a particularly concrete way. Teeth and dental health are an easy thing for people to imagine in their head because everyone has a set whether they’re white and shiny or black and rotted. This makes it easy to draw a comparison between people that care for their teeth and those who don’t. However, access to dental knowledge and services which the lower class often times doesn’t have is very different between the poor and the rich. While the rich stroll through life showing off their perfect glossy white rows of teeth, there are less privileged people out there with barren mouths whose weak pale gums …show more content…

Poor Teeth tells the story of a little girl who was raised in the low down trailer park community, used to wearing ragged non fitting clothes to school, and constantly bringing brown paper bags to school in lieu of an actual backpack. She was the same as all kids around her in every way except for one, she grew into an almost perfect straight and white set of teeth despite living among people who don’t take care of their teeth and having minimal dental care and knowledge of mouth health. Now why would Smarsh include this unique girl in her narrative that has a main focus of drawing comparisons? Wouldn’t including someone who was so contrasting to the main message of the essay diminish the point the author is trying to make? No, our little girl turns out to be Smarsh as a child. This intriguing way of comparing the poor and rich community by focusing on their teeth draws people in in a way that comparing cars or houses could never do, and by introducing this girl as an outlier, Smarsh can intrigue all possible audience members as well as correctly inform them due to her personal …show more content…

The little girl in the writing is written about how she was brought up and does not seem to be any different than her lower-class counterparts in anyway because Smarsh chooses to withhold the portion about the girl growing into perfect teeth until the middle of the story. I see this as a genius way to draw the reader into the story by making them wonder why the story is focused around this girl, and make them ask why this girl is different from anyone else? If Smarsh came right out and said that this girl is different because she has great teeth, then the reader would eventually lose interest in why the girl is unique throughout the story. It was also very smart of her to include herself in the narrative as she has first-hand experience in the subject she’s speaking of. This reassures the readers that the information being presented is correct and

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