Application Essay for Deerfield

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First of all, I want to go to the same school with my brother. Being twins, I feel like a half piece of me is in California and another half in Massachusetts. It is not normal for twins to be separated, they should be together. Phillip and I have been so close growing up. He is my best friend. I miss my brother a lot because he lives 2,987.1 miles away. Thanksgiving Breaks and Christmas Breaks are precious to me because I get to enjoy time with my twin brother. It pains me to wave goodbye to Phillip at the airport because I will not see him for another 2 or so months. I know that my brother feels alone on plane rides and I think I can change that by going to Deerfield with him. In addition, it is also frustrating to my parents because of the long-distance separation. During the parent weekend, my mom took care of me while my dad visited my brother. It would be easier for my parents if we both went to Deerfield. From my brother, I heard a lot about Deerfield’s awesome education environment, athletics and the diverse friends he has made. I believe that I can also excel in Deerfield’s classes, athletics, clubs and be able to contribute greatly to Deerfield community. Meanwhile, at Great Oak High School, I have been busy with my classes and extracurriculars. Academically, I try to challenge myself and go outside my comfort zone by taking 3 rigorous AP classes. Moreover, I have a great passion for learning especially math and science. In the Deerfield Daily Bulletin, I read about an interesting summer research program called Research Science Institute (RSI) at MIT, where Deerfield students go to study over the summer. I wish to go to that program too. For extracurriculars, I love to do community service because I love to help people. ... ... middle of paper ... ...ad an abnormal condition. When my skin returned backed to normal, I aspired to become a dermatologist because I did not want other people to experience the emotional trauma that I went through. I want people to feel comfortable and beautiful in their own skin. Furthermore, I hope Deerfield will prepare me for college. I hope Deerfield will prepare me for life as a dynamic person in society. In the future I hope to go to an Ivy College such as Harvard University and study at their medical school. Lastly, my parents have influenced my life with their kind and warm personality. Without them, I would not be the kind and happy person right now. As a final point, Deerfield is my single choice and the only school I am applying to. I will be deeply honored to be accepted to Deerfield, and if I do I promise to give back to the Deerfield community. I love Deerfield.

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