Argumentative Essay About Catcalling

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“Hey, mama! You’re lookin mighty fine today.” as the man across the street shouts. Women all over metropolitan cities hear these similar lines as they walk around in the city. Apparently, these catcalls are suppose to be flattering comments from random strangers. If you are unfamiliar with catcalling, according to the urban dictionary, catcalling is ”When a guy gives the wert whirl whistle or yells at a babydoll for the purpose of getting attention and in hopes of a future hookup”. Two authors write articles about catcalling from two different perspectives. Which author is better? In Order to have a convincing argument,their writing should have three main characteristics that are essential to have a strong argumentative essay. The first character …show more content…

In Vawter’s article there is a clear understanding of why she doesn’t want the same incident to happen to her own daughter and states “I don’t let my own nine-year-old ride her bike alone but you better believe when she is older I will, because up until my crash it was my favorite thing to do ever.”(Vawter). The author is so traumatised from the incident that she wouldn’t let her daughter ride a bike on her own. Although these teenage boys ruined the amusement of riding a bike for the author, it does not mean that her daughter will never have the opportunity to experience the same joy. Vawter’s article also tackles some of the common arguments that women are asking for problems when they wear revealing clothing. After the accident that she had on her bike, her parents questioned her saying, “What were you wearing?” attempting to blame the accident on Vawter. This is a common misconception that women are dressing the way they are to catch men’s attention, which is bullshit because Vawter shows that it does not matter what you wear when she explains her appearance during the incident,“ I was a total nerd. I was tall for my age, around five foot seven by the time I was 11, long hair … and a mouthful of shiny metal braces and headgear complimented by a shirt my parents had made at a mall kiosk, a giant pair of lips and glitter on a decal that read Tin Grins Are In”(Vawter). The author is stating her appearance during the situation, telling the reader that she wasn’t dressed in skin tight jeans or revealing clothing. This shows that women are still targeted no matter how they appear or what they are doing, it 's not their fault. On the other hand, the logos in Lewak’s article aggravates the reader due to the lack of knowledge on the topic, she claims that “catcalls are

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