Wring Prompt Critique

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The writing prompt I selected is part of an immersion process designed for fifth graders. They are currently working on a project with a President’s Day Theme. The immersion process integrates learning mediums to develop a wide range of information sources in order to obtain a varied scope on a central theme or cycle. The learning mediums include history, government, English composition and discovery words. The students research the historical significance of Lincoln and Washington in relation to the Civil War and the Independence of the United States. They work to expand their vocabulary through discovery words which are spelling words-expanded not only to include spelling, but also context and significance. The students will be able to demonstrate their knowledge through composition writing.

The writing prompt is step two of a four-step process. The first step was a ten-minute free-write. The students selected either Lincoln or Washington and wrote as much as they could recall within a ten-minute time window. After the writing process, there was 15 minutes of table group discussion about which president they chose and why. The instructor reconvenes the class back together and after a show of hands, discovers the class was about a 45/55 split between the two presidents. The two groups listed the achievements of the two men on the board. The class was able to discuss and visually see a list of both presidents’ accomplishments.

The writing prompt is a twist on the first writing assignment. The second assignment required the student to write about the president they did not select on the first assignment. If they wrote about president “A” in the free-write then they were to write about president “B” for the second assignment. The students were told assignment #2 would be a first draft. They would turn in assignment #2 along with their free-write for credit. (Verify that each student wrote about both presidents)

From the class discussion and/or your readings, write at least two paragraphs to demonstrate how president “B” is significant in American history?

Provide at least 3 examples from the board or your readings. We have 20 minutes in class to begin and work out details. Staple free-write and first draft together and turn in at the beginning of class tomorrow. To receive credit, both papers must be legible.

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