When Texting Is Wrong By Randy Cohen

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Today in the Twenty-First century we have surpassed many technological advancements and excelled far past what we would have ever thought. One of our greatest technological advancements is the thing we hold in our hands everyday, our cell phones. Sometimes we don't realize just how much our phones can distract us from our lives. As a generation glued to our phones us teenagers send an average of 3,339 texts per month. In Randy Cohen's essay, “When texting is wrong” he states how we are overcome by texting and how it damages our social and personal lives. Cohen’s main argument is that texting causes “harm.” He uses the argument that “Intimate encounters suffer greater harm.” I greatly disagree with this statement, I don't think most people are going to pause in the middle of their intimate encounters to text. He brings up a surgeon pausing during surgery to text then resuming with his procedure. I am not saying this has never happened but the odds of this are very unlikely. He uses examples and arguments that are highly unreasonable. I do agree however that texting and driving can be an issue in this era, it is a very big concern when dealing with texting, it can not only cause immense harm to the driver but others around. He always covers the issue of texting at dinner and the workplace. Most families don't find it a problem to sneak a text at the dinner table, and most workplaces aren't going to give you a slap on the wrist. I do believe some people spend too …show more content…

Instead of trying to draw in the readers with mostly facts he brings up things that are very rare and unlikely. This seems more of an essay of him showing his hatred rather than giving us facts of why texting is bad. Although he did have facts many of them were still very biased and overdrawn. His strong usage of vocabulary toward this not only made me resent his thoughts but turn against

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