War vs. Art: The Significance of Fighting Before Fiddling in Creating the Peace

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In the poem "First fight. Then fiddle." Gwendolyn Brooks argues for the necessity of brutal war in order to create a space for the pursuit of beautiful art. She uses Petrarchan sonnet structure and a conflicting, controversial turn to keep reader's close attention, create lyrical quality and influence the reader through her message. It is a wonderful example of a sonnet that follows the traditional rules, while adding a bit of a modern twist to it. Her message is simple but it is conveyed in a very original way that it stands out and grabs your attention. Throughout the sonnet the author uses alliteration, assonance and consonance making a sonnet itself a metaphor for artistic creation. In the poem, the author uses structure of the sonnet as well as patterns and rhyme to join the external form of the Petrarchan sonnet with the theme and tone. Brook's poem does not exactly follow the pattern we are used to which makes the reader follow every line closely for examination. Using a structured rhyme pattern to describe such a serious tone gives the sonnet a punchy feeling, simulating violence or pinch of strings in violin. Words like string, sing, hate, late, note, wrote, space, grace and many others all rhyme only using the last syllable, making them masculine. Also it draws attention to the ends of the lines which (the first four) she all ends with words related to music, furthering the theme of the poem. She also uses Petrarchan sonnet scheme to give the poem a lyrical quality emphasizing one of the themes of musical instruments in it. Finally, the poem is full of symbolism and imagery creating a strong connection between the way it is written and the message it carries. In her poem, Brooks seems to paradoxically argue two differe... ... middle of paper ... ...t the poem to evoke feelings and sensation that a reader can relate to giving sonnet more depth. Overall she created a poetry that, like the violin playing, reminds us of those who may have been hurt in the name of the love for poetry as well as fulfilling a promise of poetry to teach us something we at first did not wish to see. Gwendolyn Brooks creates a beautiful and complex piece of art in her poem "first fight. then fiddle" by using the structure of a Petrarchan sonnet yet adding her paradoxical, controversial twist to it and brilliantly using metaphor and alliteration for create a feeling of playing violin. The sonnet has great depth and describes the conflict of the war and peace, using playing the violin as a metaphor for the peace the author tries to keep through winning the war and leaving us with the hope to return to the violin after the worst is over.

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