W Workingman Play Analysis

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WINGMAN is a sci-fi, romantic drama with some humor entwined. The concept is strong and has merit. The premise reminds one of the well-received film “HER.” The idea of the computer program “Rex” being physically manifested through a hologram is smart. In addition, it’s the computer, who appears to be the protagonist vs. the human. The script explores themes about living in a fantasy vs. reality and the consequences of power. Rex’s goal is clear. He needs to save Charley. The stakes are personal and high. There’s certainly potential for this concept. However, with that said, the script would benefit from more development. First, there are plenty of strengths. The idea of the computer program falling in love with a human is smart. The …show more content…

The first act break comes when Rex decides to investigate Paul. He knows something is wrong. This drives act two. Act two, however, becomes a bit repetitive, slowing the pace. Rex constantly tells Charley that Paul isn’t good for her, and Charley constantly doubts herself and repeats that she needs Paul to help save her company. The structure would benefit from stronger pivotal plot points and tension. It’s only at the end that a ticking clock is created when Rex is racing against the clock to save himself and Charley. The other concern about the presentation is that Charley and Paul share no chemistry and it’s very challenging to believe that Charley believes they are in love. If the audience doesn’t believe the events, then the story loses credibility. It would benefit the script to be more realistic vs. fantasy-oriented. Some of the events feel too exaggerated, such as Paul jumping out of the plane. Again, this makes the tone ambiguous. One doesn’t know if it’s supposed to be funny or not. The tone is very dissimilar from the scene in which Paul throws Charley over the railing. The attack on Charley is darker than the rest of the script. The climax actually might have been more satisfying if Paul announced Charley’s death, but then the doors open and Charley walks in (the new Charley) with Rex. There might be some struggle and then the police could arrest Paul. This would create more of a hero vs. foe

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