The Reflection Of If We Must Die

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The tone of “If We Must Die” conveys inspiration, while the tone of “Harlem” is frustration which indicates the difference between the poets’ attitudes toward racial oppression. In the first eight lines of “If We Must Die”, the speaker insists on dying nobly. By stressing the last words of these lines: “hogs”, “dogs”, “lot” and “shed”. Readers might experience a strong feeling that the speaker and his allies will die as heroes. The use of an exclamation point in line eight, “Shall be constrained to honor us though dead”, strengthens the speaker’s emotions; it also makes the tone more motivational. Then, there is a dramatic turning point in line nine, “Oh, Kinsmen! We must meet the common foe”. This dramatically changes of the tone making it …show more content…

Otherwise, they might die miserably. In contrast, there are no assertive sentences in Hughes’ poem. “Harlem” is built on six questions, and these questions make the readers feel inconclusive. Hughes seems to believe that when people face uncertainties in their lives, they will concurrently feel frustration. Therefore, the questions make the readers gain a sense of the poet’s indefinite attitude of racial oppression; Hughes also uses many negative words, such as “fester”, “sore” and “stink” to convey his frustrated tone. Further, in the third stanzas, “Maybe it just sags like a heavy load”, unlike the other lines in the poem, is not a question; it reflects the poet’s hopelessness because he no longer questions, he is expressing a possibility. However, there is also a turning point in the last line, “Or does it explode?” Here, the tone changes from frustrated to threatened. This shows a dangerous and destructive action that hopeless people might take to defend themselves while living in constant fear of. During the civil right movement, blacks did not have rights as the whites …show more content…

McKay’s long poem contains many progressions. There is no space between lines; it is a continuous poem as it requires the readers remain focus from the beginning to the end. This poem could be effectively presented as a speech to soldiers who are about to fight with their enemies. Therefore, the poem must be long so that it can gradually stir up the morale of the soldiers. Each line is almost the same length, indicating the formal attitude of the speaker who is possibly the leader. Also, as a motivational speech, it has to be consistent so that it can capture the soldiers’ attention without distraction. However, in contrast, the length of “Harlem” is short, and the poem is inconsistent: it consists of eleven lines broken into four stanzas. The first and last stanzas contain one line, while the other two contain seven and two lines respectively. Some lines are short, others are longer. Therefore, readers might become uncomfortable or frustrated while reading it; but this seem to be the poet’s purpose, Hughes utilizes the length of his poem to convey to readers, especially the whites, the blacks’ feelings of dreams being deferred because of racism and injustice in society. Additionally, because the poem is short, the readers might understand Hughes’ point quickly. It also implies that the speaker has

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