The Alchemist Alternate Ending

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Blood and Sand The winds howled through the canyon interior, creating odd shrieks and whines. The tall light-brown earthy walls rose high, far higher than any man could see, like giants staring down at feeble mankind. The night sky, far above the canyon walls was illuminated by stars and the luminous full moon. It was unbearably cold, with a sharp breeze that seemed to go right through any number of layers of thick clothing. The only true escape from the chill was in the caravan, a large, bulbous vehicle, wheels outfitted for the rough, rocky path it was taking. Some sat in the caravan, mostly women and children, amongst the numerous crates and bags of supplies, the less fortunate of the refugees walked alongside, rifles in hand. The men’s thick, heavy jackets were torn in places and filthy, covered in dirt and the general grime of overuse, some had stains of red, a reminder of the dangerous lives they lived. All of the …show more content…

The men scrambled to seek cover, attempting to return fire. Jeremy, who was closest to the caravan, sprinted over and banged on the sides of the vehicle, yelling “Get down!” prompting the women and children to duck behind barrels and crates, some lying on their stomachs. For his courage he was shot down while attempting to dash behind a withered joshua tree, a stray bullet catching him in the neck. The caravan lurched forward as the driver slammed down onto the gas pedal, trying to clear the ravine before it was too late. A number of assailants turned and painted the sides of it with holes. The refugee fighters tried desperately to follow, moving from rock to rock, tree to tree, avoiding a hail of bullets coming from either side. Some had already fallen in the resulting battle, and many more were wounded, a few slung over one of his fellow fighters’ shoulders, half delirious from the pain, new red stains forming on their battered

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