The Abandoned Mental Hospital - Original Writing

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The Abandoned Mental Hospital - Original Writing

I collected several items that I would be in need of because today was

when my friends and I were going to explore Cane Hill, the mental

hospital that has been abandoned for years. I gathered a torch, my

slingshot and a few French bangers. I left my house feeling thrilled

as well as sick, for I was about to enter a hospital that has been

haunted even since people worked there.

I met Michael and Shaun outside their houses; both of them had torches

because we knew it would be pitch black, as dusk came upon us. We set

off, for the first five minutes there was complete silence amid us, my

friends and I were as jittery as a novice driver as none of us had

clue what to expect.

Warily, we slowly approached the front gate to find a very convenient

hole in it. As we clambered through the tiny hole we put our torches

on, since dark was already upon us. On the way through the jagged,

cratered path, which looked like it had been bombed over and over

again, we stumbled upon an average sized house which had every window

boarded up - except for one.

I felt a strange shiver down my back as we realised that we had to

scale a ten foot wall, just to get inside. When all three of us were

over the wall, we stared silently through the open window which still

had shards of glass around it, only to see faint outlines in the house

dark as a coal mine. Seeing as I was the biggest, my friends urged me

through first. I felt terrified as well as curious. I stepped into a

corridor which looked around ten meters long, but as we slowly crept

through the corridor it felt like much more, like it never ended.

Around the first corner it became pitch black. All we could see was

what our torches managed to cover with its light.

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