Subtlety In Hills Like White Elephants By Ernest Hemingway

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Subtlety can either create an amazing story or it can ruin a perfectly fine story. If you are subtle about something it may show that you are uneducated in the category or that you are uninterested in it, and especially in writing it may show that you simply do not know anything about the topic. There can also be a great factor in writing with subtlety because if you use it correctly you can keep your reader wondering what is going to happen next and you can allow him to live out many scenarios to the story in their head. Omission of a conclusion or important details may also lead to the same effects that subtlety does. If you completely omit some details from the text, you may lose your reader but if you omit the correct ones you will have …show more content…

In this particular story Hemingway gives us two main characters, an American man and his girlfriend. These two are sitting in a bar and conversing about their lives and the alcohol that they are drinking. Soon the girl says that the hills appear as if they are white elephants to her and later on she says they no longer look like them. She then states, "They don't really look like white elephants”(Hemingway 230). The man then brings up an operation that he wishes the girl goes through so that everything can be the same between them once again but it seems as if the woman does not want to go through with it, but she then tells us that he will do anything for him to love her again. The man speaks with her and through here he explains that this is what will fix them, "’Then what will we do afterward?’ ‘We'll be fine afterward. Just like we were before.’ ‘What makes you think so?’ ‘That's the only thing that bothers us. It's the only thing that's made us unhappy’"(Hemingway 230)Hemingway never describes any details about what the operation is or what it is for he just tells us that everything will go back to normal after the operation. He leaves us wondering what this operation is and it can be a very powerful thing. At first you may wonder …show more content…

Enigma is a term used to describe something that is puzzling or mysterious. In both previous stories “The Hills Like White Elephants” and “The Cask of Amontillado” there are moments in the story that enigma is used and through this use they puzzle the reader and drag them deeper into the story. Through this use the author can actually connect the reader to the story and it can make a powerful connection because the reader is no longer just reading the story he/she is now connected with the story in an effort to piece together the parts given by the author to make a whole that is able to be reread and understood in a different matter than presented. This strategy of omission, subtly, and enigma causes the reader to reread the text many times to try and understand the main points that the author wished to get across. This causes more engagement with the text, and more active readers reading the

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