Similarities Between Dillard And Langston Hughes

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Imagine, for a moment, that a complete stranger is chasing a group of kids down an icy street in the dead of the winter. Now imagine a pre-teen sitting in the middle of a Southern Baptist revival service. The scenarios described above are the basis of short stories by Annie Dillard and Langston Hughes. Dillard writes about an early childhood memory of tossing ice balls at passing cars on a blustery, winter afternoon that turned into a footrace with a complete stranger. Hughes recalls a childhood memory as well. His being that of sitting in a revival service with his aunt, frantically searching for God in the pews. As in any case, the writer’s share striking similarities and stark differences in their composition. None of the similarities …show more content…

This similarity is adding an underlying tone of dark humor to even the most serious of events. The best example of this is shown during the church service of Hughes and as the kids were kidding chewed out by the stranger in Dillard’s. 6“Finally Westley said to me in a whisper: "God damn! I'm tired o' sitting here. Let's get up and be saved." So he got up and was saved.” Hughes makes light of a very serious situation by taking the Lord’s name in vain in the middle of a church service. He also shows that he wasn’t the only person who was on the fence about being saved. 7“The point was that he had chased us passionately without giving up, and so he had caught us. Now he came down to earth. I wanted the glory to last forever.” In most cases, the kids that got caught would be rattled. They wouldn’t want there “glory” to last more than a minute or two. Dillard provides a humorous touch to eradicate a potentially serious …show more content…

Both Dillard and Hughes rely on a combination of objective and subjective description, but Dillard relies on a more subjective path, while Hughes treads safely on his own separate road of objective description. In her work, Dillard describes the backyard sports she played as a kid, in particularly football. She describes the rush she got from playing with the boys. 8“Nothing the girls did could compare with it.” She inserts her own opinion and thoughts to create a more detailed experience. She’s not worried about describing the appearance of the ball, but rather what it felt like to play the game. She does however; dot the passage with uses of objective description here and there two allow more for a complete picture. She does this most noticeably when she describes the boys she played with. 9“The oldest two Fahey boys were there—Mikey and Peter—polite blond boys who lived near me on Lloyd Street…” Dillard brings us closer to her childhood by describing what the boys looked like objectively. Langston Hughes did his best to keep his personal thoughts away from his writing. He focused on the objective and stayed there for the majority of his piece. 10 “… old women with jet-black faces and braided hair, old men with work-gnarled hands.” Hughes creates a crystal clear picture for us without letting us in on what’s going on in his head. He has no desire to share subjectively until the very

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