Opting Out Of Standardized Test Rizga Summary

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Standardized tests have been used to see how much a child has learned over a certain period of time. These tests have been a highly debated issue with many parents and just people in general. In the article “Opting out of standardized tests? Wrong answer,” the author Michelle Rhee argues that people should not be trying to opt out of standardized tests because it allows the country to see how much a child has learned and the things they need to improve. On the other hand, in the article “Everything You’ve Heard About Failing Schools Is Wrong,” the author Kristina Rizga argues that standardized tests are not an efficient way to measure a student’s intelligence. Rizga better proves her thesis through the use of solid argumentation. Rizga is more …show more content…

Rizga shows her understanding of her audience through the use of appeals, reinforcement of thesis, and lead-in to the introduction. Rizga demonstrates strong audience awareness by telling the story of Maria, a Salvadorian girl newly arrived to the United States. Rizga writes about Maria’s struggles in her country as well as the struggles she was faced with upon arriving to the United States, which appeals to the audience’s emotions. Rhee, however, has a very weak appeal, “As a parent, I understand that problem.” Unlike Rhee, Rizga immediately begins her article with Maria being bullied in school for not knowing English. Rhee, on the other hand, just simply states that she is a parent with a daughter of her own. All throughout Rizga’s article, she makes sure to reinforce her thesis. Rizga does this by saying that the school “is among the lowest-performing 5 percent of schools in the country.” She also states that the school has an 88 percent college acceptance rate and asks the question “Was this what a failing school looked like?” Rhee, however, is constantly contradicting herself which therefore goes against her argument. Unlike Rhee, who contradicts herself, Rizga is constantly connecting everything she says with her thesis. Rhee, on the other hand, completely contradicts herself when saying “Standardized tests don’t accurately measure how students are learning and many other indicators exist. That’s absolutely correct.” Here, she is agreeing with the other side of the argument but her thesis in the beginning clearly states that she believes standardized tests are an efficient way to measure how students are learning. Rizga demonstrates strong audience awareness by quickly beginning her article with the story of Maria. Rhee begins her article by giving many weak analogies. Rizga starts her article with the words of someone telling Maria to speak English, but clearly she does not know the language.

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