Sugar Consumption: A Silent Threat to Health

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Richards is more effective in persuading the audience to consider the health risks of sugar. Richards provides facts and analytical statistics from multiple sources about the dangers of an excess amount of sugar. These risks range from a simple fix to something as serious as increased risk for cancer, obesity, diabetes, as well as an increased risk of an early death. According to the “Journal of the American Heart Association Internal Medicine, concluded that people who consumed more than a quarter of their daily calories as sugar were more than twice as likely to die than those who restricted their intake to less than 10 percent of total calories.” This quote is effective because it first tells of the Ethos of the speaker and instills a foreboding fear in the reader. However, for others this quote is not as effective as a story because it does not provide any personal experiences and instead relies on third party sources that does not give any indication of individuality. …show more content…

Richards uses this quote as well as a quote from Laura A. Schmidt of the Philip R. Lee Institute for Health Policy Studies at the University of California, in order to reinforce how bad too much sugar is for the human body saying, “The new paradigm hypothesizes that… too much sugar does not just make us fat; it can also make us sick.” This again reestablishes the fact based reporting that is in direct contrast from the Konie article which uses personal experiences and anecdotes in order to support her

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