Rhetorical Analysis Of Making It In America

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Making It in America Critique In 1960, one out of every four people in America was working in manufacturing. In 2018, less than one in ten people is employed through the manufacturing industry (Heather Long CNN). What has caused the change and how does this affect average American workers? In the essay, "Making It in America," author Adam Davidson describes the current conditions for the average workers in American factories and how they have changed. He describes his findings on the changes in manufacturing since the late 1900s, early 2000s: "Factories have replaced millions of workers with machines" (Davidson 318). To elaborate on the situation more thoroughly, he tells the story of a few workers in a Greenville, South Carolina factory. Davidson’s approach of using average people to tell his story is effective in pulling on a person’s sympathy and empathy. Also, using personal research rather than someone else’s statistics to support his claims makes his argument more valid. Davidson’s main point is that the technological advances in America have changed the way factories operate for the workers and lightly persuade the reader that the changes may be negative. …show more content…

He tells the story of a young woman working in the factory as a sanitation worker, essentially. Maddie Parlier was a bright young woman with a lot of potential in high school, but was unable to get proper education due to extenuating circumstances, or circumstances out of her control. Davidson makes the reader aware that there is no possibility of Parlier advancing in the company and that her job is even in jeopardy due to her lack of higher education. Davidson follows that story with the story of a man named Luke Hutchins. He is a college educated in Machine Tool Technology. According to Davidson, his job is very secure and should continue to be due to his level of

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