Rhetorical Analysis Mabel

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In this passage Mabel compares herself and others to flies struggling for milk in a saucepan. The author uses figurative language to portray the insecurity Mabel feels as well as her desire to fit in with society. “We are all like flies trying to crawl over the edge of the saucer,...” Through the use of a simile, Mabel compares herself, as well as everyone else at the gathering, to flies. This is significant because it allows Mabel to see herself as equal to everyone else. “and repeated the phrase as if she were crossing herself, as if she were trying to find some spell to annul this pain, to make this agony endurable.” This significance is further evidenced by the equalizing thought being compared to the sign of the cross through a simile, …show more content…

The sign of the cross is sacred to Catholics, just as the thought of being equal and secured is sacred to Mabel. Furthermore, the thought of being an equal “fly” to everyone else is further valued as it is compared to a magic spell, something able to fix Mabel’s problems instantly. “If she could say that over often enough and make herself see the flies, she would become numb, chill, frozen, dumb.” Mabel’s distaste for her own insecurity is shown through her desire to become “numb, chill, frozen, dumb” rather than to continue to feel as she currently does, plagued with self-doubt. “She saw herself like that—she was a fly, but the others were dragonflies, butterflies, beautiful insects, dancing, fluttering, skimming, while she alone dragged herself up out of the saucer.” There is no relief from Mabel’s self-loathing, as her fantasy ultimately fails and she begins to her herself as inferior once more; this is shown through Mabel still being compared to a fly, this time through a metaphor, while others are compared to more spectacular creatures. Mabel is shown to be insecure through her self-comparison …show more content…

“it made her furious to be treated like a house agent or a messenger boy, to be made use of.” Mabel grows discontent with the conversation she is having as she realizes she is being used for sympathy, rather than being valued as an equal member of high-society capable of conversing properly. This is shown through the simile comparing Mabel to a “house agent or a messenger boy” two low-class positions that are used to serve rather than to be treated as equals. “and all the time she could see little bits of her yellow dress in the round looking-glass which made them all the size of boot-buttons or tadpoles;” The insecurity tied to Mabel’s dress also contributes to Mabel feeling as though she is not an equal, this is shown as Woolf compares the dress to small objects, through metaphors but clearly states the pain Mabel feels from wearing a dress she does not feel comfortable in. This is evidenced in the line,“and it was amazing to think how much humiliation and agony and self-loathing and effort and passionate ups and downs of feeling were contained in a thing the size of a threepenny bit.”, as even the smallest glimpse of the dress makes Mabel feel deeply unequal. “...it was impossible that the black dot, leaning forward, gesticulating, should make the yellow dot, sitting solitary,

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