Philosophical Allegory In Lord Of The Flies: An Analysis

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“The Devil Within: Philosophical Allegory in Lord of the Flies” is an essay I wrote for the book Lord of the Flies, explaining it’s philosophical allegories. My essay is mainly focussing on how the lack of authority can lead evil to surface, and cause civil disorder. After rereading my essay, and going through the feedbacks, I found three major mistakes I made writing this essay. First problem I found is that I do not have enough information or used wrong information to support my statement stated. For the third paragraph of my essay, I brought up the idea of the conch represents a form of law that all the littluns and biguns had to obey, in the end of the sentence however, I ended up saying Piggy’s action of holding onto the conch represents Piggy hanging on on power. Also, for my concluding paragraph, I did not have any more points to prove my point of lack of authority can cause evil within us to surface, so I had to conclude with a summary of the statement said in the previous paragraphs. If I had more information to prove my point, I would be able to have a much stronger conclusion. …show more content…

Half way through the essay, instead of proving lack of authority can bring out the dark side of a human being, I started to talk about how a central power is necessary for the success of a group. In the second paragraph, I used Thomas Hobbes’ theory of there is a malicious nature within each and every human, and that as long as everyone is working towards a common goal, that nefarious aspect will be concealed. The quote doesn't fit with the idea I was trying to prove. It has practically nothing to do with lack of authority can show our primitive side. So, not focussing on one topic is something I noticed, not only in this essay, but two previous essays as

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