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Have you ever thought about having the ability to use your own (personal) electronic devices in school? Arguments consisting of teachers and students happen all the time on personal electronic devices. People are contemplating whether or not personal ale tropic devices should be allowed to be used during school hours. There are many pros and cons to this situation. People aren't really sure if they should allow the devices because once it's said that there allowed there's no going back and there is always what if the isn't such a good idea part. I think access to personal electronic devices in school should not be allowed.
Having access to electronics for too much time can be harmful. Electronics can be very bad for the eyes. "According to Dr.Blakeney, an optometric adviser to the College of Optometrists, computers will not permanently damage the eyes; however, they can cause strain or exacerbate existing eye conditions." Dr.Blakeney is telling us that computer screens (and any other types of electronic screens) will not permanently damage your eyes but they will hurt them. Electronic devices can get you addicted in an unhealthy way. You spend so much time on ten you don't even realize the time passing until you look up and notice the clock and time. Depending what your on you can get brain washed. Videos, video games (or just games), and sometimes even music/lyrics can brainwash you. Just like that a bunch of the information you had inside your brain, gone! So in conclusion, it's not so good to stay to long on an electronic device.
Dangerous links/sites and other things can be accessed through personal electronic devices. Students can find links that have passed through the network. The school network is very monitored but many...

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I think that access to personal electronic devices in school should not be allowed. Electronics can be harmful. They're bad for your eyes, they can get you addicted, and can cause a brainwash. Dangerous things can be accessed on personal electronic devices that are not being monitored. Students can find links to inappropriate things, cyber bullying can be a problem, and child predators. Students can get access to things that are not allowed on their own devices. They can play games, listen to music, go on social media places, and cheat. Try and persuade your friends to go against personal electronic devices during in school. If your school decides they want to allow access write a letter to your principal about why you shouldn't be allowed access and then get your friends and other people to sign it.

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