Personal Narrative-Ripper

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Everyone is so panicked, so rushed, so busy. I sit and watch how they all run to and from the train only stopping once safely (sometimes) on or off and the first thing they do is check their phones thinking that they will have 100 urgent notifications that all just came through from when they checked it 45 seconds ago. No one looks up. No eye contact. No asking how other people how they are. No smile.
I jump out of my seat as I see an elderly lady board. I offer her my seat and she looks shocked. A young whipper-sniper being polite? That’s new! I could see confusion and caution running through her head. She gratefully takes my seat and says a polite thank you. I wondered if she would think about what happened again. Maybe tell some of her friends. …show more content…

I started to walk towards the fairy light lit alfresco dining area to have some dinner when I saw a tall, lanky boy about my age walking in my direction. We made eye contact and I smiled softly. I stopped walking so he could reach me as I thought he was going to ask for directions. When he got to me the first thing he said was “Hi. How are you?” I was already shocked, people don’t say that any more, they don’t care. We stand by a bar table talking about the show for a little bit then the boy, who I learnt goes by Dave, pulled out a small cardboard box and hands it to me. I give him a confused look and ask what it is. Dave replies by saying it is his way of saying thank you. “I saw you on the train this morning when you gave up your seat for the lady. It was really nice of you and it made me think about what I could do for someone”. “Thank you” I replied while shifting my weight from foot to foot. I was a bit wary, this whole thing seems kind of odd. Dave kept going, “I had never thought that someone else might need my seat more than me”. I opened the box and there was a gorgeous, flower topped donut. I giggled and said “thank you” while looking away shyly. It was getting late now and I was hungry and just wanted to go home so I started to say that I should go. Dave agreed and said that his mates that he came to the show with would be wondering where he got to. He also said that he should go because due to my small act of kindness before, he was inspired to do something nice for someone too and that he decided to surprise his little sister. She was sick and couldn’t come to the show so he thought he could take some of the show home to her before she went to bed. We exchanged numbers and went our separate

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