Personal Narrative Fiction

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Light was pouring inside the room, hitting on Julian’s face.Julian woke up in a fast pace racing for his phone, checking for messages Julian glanced at a particular one that read “Storm hitting south central Chicago,Illinois”. Julian was always bothered when a storm was heading his way. Annoyed again, Julian went to serve himself up a good Luck Charms cereal for breakfast with a side of oj to wash it all down. After his morning meal, Julian went to check on the laundry, (His mom was at her job every weekend working a part time job as a nurse and his dad was a scientist studying about electricity and chemicals). It was summer and Julian was all alone with his dogs Kevin and Gracie. His dogs were gentle, petite dogs that never hurt nobody. …show more content…

Abram shoved julian out of the way claiming “We shouldn’t go out there”. Abram was the serious one in the family. Julian the shoved his brother out of the way yelling ‘We should go explore what the lightning has left for us. In the middle of the crater Abram identified a multiple crystals. Julian opened the screen door and dashed towards the crystals. Julian admired the crystals. Abram came darting to Julian warning him not to make contact with the crystals. Julian was so curious like always he had to touch the crystals. Abram was startled that he tripped over the garden hose that was laying flat. Julian was launched off his shoes when he made contact with a certain crystal. Julian landed in the pool head first.Abram rushed to Julian’s aid and asked “Are you ok”. Julian did not reply.Julian started shaking saying “I don’t feel so good”. Abram rushed inside giving him a blanket to warm up.Abram rushed outside and did the unbelievable. Abram grasped all the crystals and did not feel anything. Abram gapped at the crystals that were gone. Abram rushed inside and went to check on Julian. Julian was slowly lifting his head up. Could this be the end of

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