Personal Narrative Essay: The West Branch Show Choir Competition

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Do you know what it feels like to give everything you have into one performance and then get first place, because I do. The West Branch show choir competition provided me with the life lesson of perseverance, determination, hard work. To start the day you wake up at five in the morning and get on the bus at five thirty. You set out for West Branch. The bus ride in the morning is usually quiet. You don’t hear many people talking because everyone is going back to sleep. When you arrive at West Branch you get off the bus and the hosts of the school will stamp your wrist. Once everyone is off of the bus we head to our room, set our stuff down, and then we go help unload trailers. After the heavy work, the girls go back to the room and start hair …show more content…

Walking onto the stage is a feeling I can not describe. Hearing everyone cheering for you is something I will never be able to explain. As you are walking on you have to act in character. I am a maid so I have to act prim and proper. I am showing the the guests Mr.Body’s mansion. While you are performing you always need to make sure you are in character. After the first couple songs you are getting into it and having fun and then you get to the girls song. This is the most stressful song because this is the song right before the costume change. I am hoping when they guys changed none of them moved my stuff. I am nervous that I won’t find my costume or I will put it on wrong. Right after the song I am running off stage and yelling for someone to unzip my dress. I grab my costume and I start putting it on. I have someone help untangle my straps and pull up the back of my costume. After I get my costume on I am running back on stage. We start our closer song with Mr.Body reappearing. We all react and have a fun time at the party. I am out of breath, but I know I need to dig deep to find more air and push through. Once the song is over and I hit that last pose, it is a feeling I can not describe. Knowing I just killed that performance and I couldn’t have done any better. Knowing my team and I had the determination to push through and kill that performance is an amazing …show more content…

In critique one of the judges comes in and give you tips on how to improve your show. They also give you compliments on what you did well in your show. All I can think about while in critique is how well we just did on our performance. Critique is over and now we head back to the room to change and go to awards. Awards make me nervous. You never know if maybe one judge loved your show better than another or if one judge hated your show and scored you terrible. I am also thinking about the other schools that were here and how well they did. Once the MC announce 3rd place and we are down to 1st and 2nd, I am even more nervous. I am holding hands with the person next to me. They announce 2nd place. We stand and cheer for them knowing they did the best they could. They announce 1st place grand champions and Acapella won. We storm the stage jumping and cheering and some people were even crying. As we head off of the stage cheering we go back to the room to grab our things and load the buses. The bus ride home was definitely one of the best bus rides because everyone was in such a great mood. Everyone knew they did the best they could and the team has put so much hard work into practice to make this happen. This award definitely wouldn’t of happened if we didn’t work

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