Patient By Rachel Riederers: A Comparative Analysis

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Both stories share the key characteristics of a personal narratives, however Rachel Riederers “Patient” provides a more in depth look into darker time in her life, “Simone, with her sensible shoe suggestions-this is all her fault” (Patient, 163), this form of comedic relief lessens some of the tension and makes the essay easy to get enthralled in ; Whereas David Owens “Scars” first two pages really only give a brief background into his personal story and uses a more jovial position as well as some comedic relief “.. I told her that some of my happiest memories involved accidents.” (Scars, 2) Owens brand of comedic relief made for an interesting essay by seeing scars as memory books, something to look back on fondly .Rachel Riederers diction

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