Leslie Norris

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How do you choose between two stories and choose which one is better? If you choose based on how interesting the storyline, then you would choose the story, by W.D. Wetherell ( The Bass, The River, and Sheila Mant) is a better story than Leslie Norris (Shaving) because it has a good storyline that you can actually follow rather than, by Leslie Norris which is a shorter and less interesting storyline that makes it not interesting to read. Also, by W.D. Wetherell is the best because it shows conflict that people deal with everyday rather than a conflict that happens every so often in a person’s life. This is also another way to relate to the book. The story by W.D. Wetherell is a better story then Leslie Norris is story because it has a lot …show more content…

All of this conflict consists of something that is not changeable. One story that this occurs in is the story, by W.D. Wetherell consists of the boy choosing who to go with Shelia or the Bass that he could catch. Next, they both consist of a conflict that the character has to deal with. In the story by Leslie Norris, on ( Pg. 1 ). It says, Jackie asked, “ How's your father?” Barry said, “ No better, he's not going to get better.” Which shows that in this story that the character has to deal with internal conflict as well as external conflict. In, the story by W.D. Wetherell consists of a boy going on a date with a girl. In the middle, of their date the boy had to make a decision to either catch the bass he already has on the line or continue the date with Sheila Mant. This is a huge dilemma for the boy and there is a lot of conflict between this one part. On ( Pg.3 ), Sheila Mant said, “ I think fishing is dumb.” Then she continued by saying, “ I mean, it's boring and all. Definitely dumb”. This is internal conflict because the boy likes fishing and it hurts his feelings knowing the girl he loves so much hates fishing. From this, there is some sensory imagery and contrasting imagery that shows this describing the setting of the boy and Sheila Mant on the boat where he either decides to catch the bass or stay with Sheila Mant and cause no …show more content…

Wetherell, is a much more compelling than the story, by Leslie Norris because it is most likely to happen everyday and it is something you can learn from and relate to. What was proved was that more conflicts and happiness like these events in, by W.D. Wetherell, is most likely to happen to someone because it is what we experience in our everyday lives. Life is more of a bumpy path that you learn from. So in, the story by W.D. Wetherell, there was more conflicts and happiness that we would most likely experience on this bumpy

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