Learning from Mistakes

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Writing styles that are transitioned from my old high school to San Jose State University is quite difficult even if I have been studying how to create writing ever since I was born in the United States. In high school I took normal English classes, which are not remedial or advanced placements, and focused on methods of planning out my essays, working on specific paragraphs such as the introduction and conclusion of an essay, how to transition one paragraph to another, and also using the correct grammar and spelling. I feel that throughout my high school and future college writings I will slowly improve to the point where I feel satisfied of my work.
As for my own personal preference of working may not apply to others because everyone has different ways to study and work. I prefer to work independently and in solitude were no one can bother me, and all the resources I need are available nearby myself. At home in my room is a perfect example because it’s a place where I feel safe, with minimal distractions, and also I know where to get all the needed materials or supplements for myself. As a learner there are also certain types of conditions that I enjoy or dislike. The types of teaching strategies that get me in the mood to learn is that if the teacher knows the material and how to teach it, makes the room a friendly environment, takes times to work independently with students if needed, and also keeps their calm whenever a situation arises. The types of teaching strategies that I dislike are presentations, because it forces students to teach the other students and really, students don’t really learn anything at all or even pay attention it’s a waste of time. When teachers call on students who are not paying attention or not e...

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...could have been said better and I decided to improve that by using another sentence which was “which is an acronym for:” There were also time I had to revise the whole paragraph because it was wrong and it was not needed for the instructors expectations. I had to revise entirely my conclusion because I used “In conclusion,” or it was supposed to be a personal experience or how it can be related for future students or my own personal review.
I believe that throughout this spring semester I believe that my writing capabilities have improved from last semester taking remedial English and has evolved even more now that I have graduated high school. I also believe that with the new methods that I have received which was using peer reviewing and using feedback to revise my essay will improve my future essays that I will need to use to improve my grades. Word Count: 1054.

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