Keisha's Struggle With Ms. Hill

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Firstly, one of the many ways conflict develops the characters’ is through their struggles with each other. At the beginning of the novel, Keisha’s struggle with Ms. Hill introduces her character into the novel. One day, Keisha is called down to the office alongside other Primm students, she secretly hopes it is because of her application to Avery University. In reality, the students are called down to the office because Ms. Hill has put them into SCARF (Save the Children At-Risk Foundation), because of this Keisha is now unable to apply for Avery. Keisha gets into an argument about Avery with Ms. Hill which escalates fairly quickly: “I needed to get to her head. My fingers curled around her long, hay-looking hair and I snatched my hand back …show more content…

Until Keisha and Betty arrive at their first swim meet in Alabama, they are not aware of the fact that they are going to be competing against only white girls. Being the only two black girls at the swim meet, Keisha and Betty felt out of place. Suddenly, one white girl walks up to the two of them and asks if they are going to be wearing swim caps in the pool, Keisha replies, “Trying my best to smile, I said, “Sure. We always wear our caps to swim. No problem’” (123). When Keisha responds to the white girl with a strange level of calmness, it shows her containing herself. While talking to the white girl Keisha uses short sentences to get her point across, trying to avoid as much conflict as possible. On the other hand, when Keisha attacks Ms. Hill she had no problem, but while talking back to the white girls she forces herself not to say much this is because Keisha did not want the white girls to think bad of her and Betty just because they are black. Whereas, Betty does not care what they think about her as long as she beats them in the competition. As a whole, around white people Keisha and Betty act like polar …show more content…

One day in the middle of the night Keisha decides to follow Mama to Lion’s Den, but what she does not know is that she is followed by Jeebie. As she is hiding behind a car trying to spy on Mama, Jeebie grabs her and tries to rape her; Keisha struggles with him, but he is unsuccessful when Mr. Hakim saves her. Later on, that same night when she goes home and talks to Rhenda about her experience with Jeebie she says, “’I honestly thought about not even fighting Jeebie. Just let him rape me and I have his funky baby and forget all this dreaming stuff. It don’t work’” (211). When Keisha is almost raped by Jeebie she is furiously fighting against him, but when Keisha goes home she says that she actually thought about not fighting. Frankly, in Keisha’s emotional situation in terms of everything going on with Betty, Mama, Malik, and then Jeebie, her thought of going through with the rape is expected. Jeebie attempting to rape her could even be considered her breaking point, where she just gives up on life, and truly it is. She gives up on everything she had planned for herself, the Olympics and Avery. The next day, Keisha does not attend her swimming practice, because of the bruises on her body. This one event changed Keisha’s life, but not for the better. Given these facts, Keisha’s struggles with other characters throughout the novel develop her character in many

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