In Kid's Room Was A Real Person Analysis

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Have you ever read something on the news that you just couldn’t believe but you knew it had to be true? If you’ve ever read something like that, it was most likely fake news. Fake news is stories that people make up or partly make up to convince the public. “Babysitter Discovers ‘Clown Doll’ In Kid’s Room Was A Real Person, Raping The Child At Night” is a fake news story of a babysitter’s point-of-view of several nights and whenever the child went to bed there were screams from her room. Later the babysitter says that the parents are not aware of a large clown doll in the child’s room and it is actually a man raping the child at night. This fake news story is an example of a hooking title but if you read it carefully there is evidence to show it is fake. Despite the fake news story’s weak appeal to ethos, it was somewhat effective at convincing adults with children it was true due to a strong use …show more content…

Many times in the story the writer says that the child is screaming but the sitter refuses to keep checking on her. This would give mixed feelings to the reader as still being frightened but also anger towards the sitter. Another hook is “When I explained to Mr. and Mrs. Klein about the situation, they acted as if they had no idea what I was talking about.” That gives a twist to the story and the reader then knows the child is in danger. At the end of the story, it states that the clown did very bad things to the child and that Calvin Winkles is awaiting trial. This fake story gives readers, parents mostly, fear of child's safety but also gives a pleasing ending because they caught the man. The writer also uses the feelings of the reader to hook them and this helps the story to seem real to the casual

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