Sharing Health Data: A Pathway to Curing Diseases

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Health records seem to be the one thing people don’t want others to know about. Nobody wants their friends or coworkers to know what kind of health issues they have. These issues are personal. In the editorial in The New York Times, “Give up Your Data to Cure Disease”, David B. Agus, a physician and Professor of Medicine, describes how health problems can be solved with the help of mass data from patients. He conveys his message that the public should allow doctors to use their medical data so they can find cures for diseases through a variety of rhetorical devices.

David Agus begins his editorial by using the rhetorical question “How far would you go to protect your health records?”(1). He uses this to get his audience to start thinking about the situation he is presenting right away. His audience is adults since adults handle health records. After this question, he states his main idea that “mass data can inform medicine… and save countless lives” to get his audience to think of how by giving their health records out, even if they don’t want to, they can make a difference in people’s lives.

Agus continues by sharing an opposing viewpoint about sharing electronic health records. He states, “Doctors complain about the time it takes to update digital records, while patients worry about …show more content…

The phrase that he repeats the most starts with “we” followed by some sort of imperative sentence. These phrases include: “We need to move past that”, “We also must block attempts”, and “We need to get over it”. By using imperative sentences, he is demanding that all adults, including himself, have to act on and change the way they have been sharing their health data. By repeating “we”, the author is emphasizing that it is vital that everyone shares their health information in order to get the best outcome for medical cures. This repetition also reassures the reader that Agus is one of them and needs to do these things as

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