First-Person Narration Techniques in "Cathedral"

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A first-person narration provides an interesting perspective on the main action of a story. A narrator can express his/her own thoughts and feelings, which in turn develops a more personal and relatable story to the reader. Raymond Carver often uses this literary point-of-view tactic in his short stories to reveal the traits of the narrator. In "Cathedral," Carver uses conversational tone and diction to reveal the narrator's character; which is prejudicial at first, but becomes empathic by the end. Knowing this narrator's characteristics facilitates the reader's understanding of major components of the story, such as the narrator's hostility to Robert, his loser-like sociality, and the climax of opening up to Robert.

One way Carver develops the personality of the narrator in "Cathedral," is by his use of conversational tone. It is as if the narrator were simply telling a story to a group of close friends that shared his viewpoints. The style of sentences delivers a tone that is sarcastic, bitter and arrogant. These qualities are developed by the structure of his words, to reflect the mood and attitude of the narrator. Carver uses Hemmingway-like hyphens to deliver sarcastic side comments that stem away from the actual story line, but ad a cynical quality to the narrator. These hyphens are disguised as parenthetical information, but are actually used as an aside for the narrator to introduce unnecessary argumentative comments. As an example, there is a point in the story where the narrator is describing the emotional situation of Beluah's 0 death, with a taste of wicked humor. "After they had been inseparable for eight years--my wife's word, inseparable--Beluah's health went into rapid decline" (Cathedral 213). The ...

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...motional for the narrator. The image depicted here is that the narrator is observing, and trying to understand, his new guest. During the drawing of the Cathedral, the narrator refuses to open his eyes, so that he can better understand the viewpoint of Robert. This empathic characteristic of the narrator was not present in the beginning of the story, and has been developed through his interaction with Robert.

We see the narrator in the beginning as a bitter and jealous man, but as the story unfolds, he changes to become more empathetic and emotional. This change in the personality of the narrator correlates with Carver's use of diction and tone. From conversation to confession, "Cathedral" is a work of art in the first-person narrative. By revealing this character through word choice and tone, the narrator comes alive and the story has more significance.

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