Family Narrative Draft Analysis

Family Narrative Draft by Ethan Hess

I’m the youngest out of five children in my family. The oldest child in my family, is Aubrey. She’s 21 years old. The next oldest, is my brother, Michael. He’s 19. The next ones are Emma and Jessica, 17 and 16 years old. Then there’s me, Ethan. I’m 14. Even though we’re close in age, we all have separate lives. I’ve wanted to become closer to my older brother. Everyone in our family gets along well, because we like to talk, and hang out with each-other. For example, I hang out with my sisters, and my brother a lot. I mostly just hang out with my brother. Me, my sisters, and my mother, like to drive around, playing music, and yelling the music at the top of our lungs. We like to go outside, and play with our new baby bunnies. We play LOTS of video games, and watch YouTube videos together. We started playing Tennis later on too. Me and my brother Mike, play Tennis together too. It’s harder for my brother to hang out, because he has college. He’s learning

I’m not trying to sound rude, really. I love them, but they can be very loud sometimes. It’s also more noise than I’m used too. Whenever it gets too loud, me and my brother, sneak back into our room, and play xbox. Often times, we won’t come out in the evening. Not even for food. My kitchen, is a smaller kitchen, so when my mom makes food, it gets crazy. It’s like a feeding frenzy! Mike and I, go out when it’s quiet to get food, or snacks. The first week was the worst, because my mom didn’t realize how much food the cousins, and our sisters ate! There was barely any food!!! Thankfully, my brother can drive a car, and we go out to get something. Sometimes, whilst getting a game. But that rarely happens anymore. Now my mother has plenty of food at home now. However, we still don’t come out of our room at the evenings, because of the cousins. When they go to bed, I feel like we have our house back